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The (Elder) General - Minverva's journal

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Published: Feb 27, 2015

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Description

- Name: Minerva Victoria
- Race: Pegasus ; Gender: Female

- Summary: A filly who is likes to boast, mischievous, somewhat arrogant and reckless. Her biggest ambition is to become one of those Royal Guards to serve Princess Celestia. However, coming from a family with generations of economics trade as their backbone, so of course, her parents also want her to carry on the family business.

As for her personality, she only likes strategy role-play, learn Taekwondo.... and especially fighting. But Minerva never fights other ponies for no reasons, since she only uses her martial art for only one purpose: to protect her friends; and that's how she got her cutie mark - a shield with the symbol of Aries....

On one occasion when she watched a large parade with her parents, with the presence of many well-known officers of the Royal Guards, Minerva was very excited. But also because of this, she got separated from her parents while trying to find a better view of the parade..... and when the other ponies tried to push their way in the crowd, Minerva suddenly got pushed out of the line, right in the middle of the trail! As the parade was still carrying on in order, they had to make a stop when a little filly like her popped out of nowhere right in their way.

With all the eyes staring at her, from the soldiers in the line to the spectating ponies, Minerva's personality was somehow reversed completely. From a confident and fearless filly, had become extremely shy and very embarrassed. As her hooves and wings became frozen stiff, couldn't even murmur "Sorry" properly, she didn't know what to do more than put her hooves on to cover her face, and laid there shivering.....

At that moment, an elder high-ranked officer - if you looked carefully he must had been a general, just by the uniform - stepped right to her, with that blank but also majestic, looked upon her of every little detail on the body, and when the cutie mark caught his eyes, the general took a closer look. Then he started to ask her names, Minerva answered stutterly , still shaking like a stick:

"I-Im... M-Minerva.... Minerva Victoria"

[Is that so?] - said the general slowly, even slower than when he approached the little filly, and his attitude..... still that blank face, with not a single slightest sight of emotion.... made you kinda wonder whether it was his character that made him like that, or was it because of his occupation, professionally trained to be such?

Surprisingly, the elder general took off his golden-plated helmet, and handed to her, and brought her back to her parents..... As the general was back in line, he gazed upon the little filly and said:

[Be a good Officer, Minerva!]

The parade went on as if nothing happened, and the insensible but majestic general disappeared in the crowd......

The little filly didn't get a chance to ask his name.

With that gold-plated helmet, and the encouragement of the elder general kept echoing in her mind, it seemed that Minerva was added wings to it, although she'd already had wings for that......... Sometimes later, she asked her parents permission to sign up for Strategy Training Academy of Equestria, and it was not a big surprise when her parents were totally approved, without any objection of any kind.

"Someday I will become a great general, wait! No! [A good Officer!] ... so that I can protect Princess Celestia, my family, my friends..... and maybe the entire Equestria"

As Minerva thinks about her dream, she carefully puts down the helmet, lays down on the green pasture, and dreams.... of those dreams that may come into reality, someday....
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This is a gift for my friend, and also the chance for me to practice my writing skills, I'd be thankful if any of you read the whole "bunch of words" that I wrote...

And my special thanks to my very best friend -

(his nickname is John Demarco) - has helped me alot in translating this story from Vietnamese to English. He's not online much on Deviantart so here is his facebook address if you guys get interesting:

www.facebook.com/profile.php?i…

My little pony belongs to Hasbro.

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duyhung2h

May 6, 2015

Bác viết truyện giỏi ghê, còn vẽ đẹp nữa... tâm khục khẩu phục